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Antiquating

I’m getting older and I’m getting fat,
My memory needs repairing and my bones are stiff
My feet are getting flatter and my bum is sagging down 
The lines are becoming groovier and my veins are standing out
So I shall  dream of:
Warm bones and perfect health
The colours of the rainbow
And a nice cup of tea –
Or maybe:
A Lamborghini and a pink silk scarf
Oakley shades and big red lips
A dark brown-eyed lover serenading me
Only thing I’d need is some energy


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  1. Date: 9/11/2010 5:45:00 AM

    Interesting and enternaining free verse about the realities and attitudes. Well done. I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 1:13:00 PM

    This is so cute. I love it. Mostly a "dark brown-eyed lover" I need one too!! lol Love Scarlett

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 10:03:00 AM

    Very cute ! As we age we need imagination don't we! Very nice .Enjoyed it..Take care~Deb

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 9:48:00 AM

    Accurate description of how we age. Well written