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Dizzy

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Dizzy

Chills interrupt me
Course of thought changes
Don't understand what I see
As the whole world rearranges

I squint to get a clear look in
Which transforms with every blink
Like a seconds glance is risky sin
As sight moves from scene to scene

Moments move and muses disappear
My expectations are erased
I question if I'm at fault here
But I sense it's just misplaced

September 2010

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  1. Date: 9/28/2010 7:44:00 AM
    wow, what a deep write. I can't help but tie this into how crazy life can get at times, and how easy it is to be spun around, and become confused. I enjoyed this piece very much! keep writing! :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 10:27:00 PM
    You couldn't have described dizzy in a better way.

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 11:52:00 PM
    Another awesome write my friend.....Larry