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To Take Independence

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To Take Independence

In the field of responsibilities
There are many consequences
Take control of your actions
Indisputable independence
Treat yourself with some respect
Taking the time to transcend
Into your inner desires
Trying hard to reflect
Through those controlled actions
Intersecting the boundaries
To which you have laid
Time to transit
Imagine jumping the wall
Tackling your first goal
Tearing away from your fears
Independently entering society

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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 7:53:00 PM

    welcome to the soup!

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 6:32:00 AM

    enjoyed your works today, well written!