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Autumn's Gift

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Autumn's Gift

Crimson leaves drift to the ground
On autumn’s breeze
Floating aimlessly as my thoughts. . .
Destined to be surrounded
Layer upon layer;
Each leaf having unique
Yet similar substance.
 
In their fall to await Death,
Their beauty has never been
Quite as lovely
Nor their colors nearly as vivid;
Returning to eventual mulch,
Nourishment for a new beginning,
Only hinting they are renewing life
With a whisper of the wind.



For Amelia Harmon's "Fall Contest"

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  1. Date: 2/16/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Beautiful, I'm an Autumn Baby so I loved this!

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 9:34:00 AM

    A lovely way to describe the circle of life Connie! Your descriptions paint my mind with all the vivid images of my favorite season.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 3:42:00 AM

    wow this is just beautiful!! such appreciation in such a simple act of nature! Your descriptions are absorbing! and again thank you for the comment on Desire's Fire...i feel very privilaged for such amaizing words..much love

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 1:09:00 PM

    Thnx for the cool comment on my writes, Connie. Your a kind friend. ...Jimmy

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 6:01:00 PM

    Your poem has that circle of life aspect that I so love about fall. Beautiful poem; a canvas painted with words. Thanks for your kind words on The Cat Man.

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 2:37:00 PM

    beautiful free verse , Connie and congratulations on your fine win!

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 10:49:00 AM

    Lovely words and so vivid a picture

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 8:14:00 AM

    Somehow I missed this beauty earlier...but a lovely poem, so glad to read it now! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 9:46:00 PM

    Beautiful entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 8:59:00 AM

    This is a poem you should be very proud of. My favorite season! You captured it well! Free verse at it's best! Thank you for your most welcome comment on my poem.

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 11:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this fine write, Connie!:) Emily

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations Connie on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 5:54:00 AM

    Very nice write, you know Ilove the cycle of life theme ;) Light & Love Debbie Do

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 4:42:00 AM

    A rare splash of beauty you have sketched in this lovely painting of Autumn. It's Gem of a Poem my friend. What a beauty in these lovely lines, 'Crimson leaves drift to the ground On autumn’s breeze Floating aimlessly as my thoughts.' Great write and a very well deserving win. Congrats for your win and many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Connie Marcum Wong

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 4:31:00 AM

    Congratulations Connie with your win in Amelia's contest.. enjoy your day, love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 2:19:00 AM

    this is a wonderland concept of how you see Autumn Connie. love this poem. Harry

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 1:12:00 AM

    oh that last line of yours just captured me-- very eloquently written Connie! Congrats with this one--wonderful way of rendering nature's cycle with this beautiful poem-- hugs, nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 10:41:00 PM

    congratulations, Connie, this is marvelous writing, very mature, and she loved YOURS!! I'm glad you took this challenge. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 10:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the Fall Contest! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 7:25:00 PM

    As beautiful poem as an Autumn Gift, dear Connie. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your nice comments. Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 6:05:00 PM

    congrats on your HM with this wonderful entry

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 5:45:00 PM

    So glad to see this one in the winners' circle, Connie. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 3:33:00 PM

    So beautiful..I love it. congrats on your success in the contest. BG

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 2:59:00 PM

    This speaks gently....just as the last line of your lovely poem. Congratulations, Connie on your winning poem! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 2:26:00 PM

    Congrats Connie on your super win in the Fall contest... enjoy your happy moment my friend with luv.. glad u enjoyed the wedding photos..luv..

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:42:00 PM

    Hi Connie.. my wedding photos are now posted on my new blog tonight.. the system only allows ten photos now .. new setup..so cannot put any of the scenic or villa views from Italy just yet but later.. enjoy ..luv..

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 12:13:00 PM

    Connie a beautiful entry for the contest, all the best to you :) enjoy the week ahead as well.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 12:04:00 PM

    The cycle of nature. lovely write. Best wishes.

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 11:27:00 AM

    Beautiful and serene, Connie. Good luck in the contest! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 9:51:00 AM

    You really capture the beauty of the falling leaves even as they "await death." And I think this poem also describes the human journey through life. Excellent entry for the fall contest and I wish you success, Connie. Love, Carolyn

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