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The Robin

                                         At the
                                          foot
                                            of 
                                            the
                                           cross
                                              a
                                            bird
                                            came
                                              to 
                                            sing
                For his friend some comfort for to bring
                A tiny droplet fell and splashed his chest
                                            soft
                                           words
                                            from 
                                           tired
                                            lips
                                            Fly
                                           high
                                            fly
                                            free
                                            sing
                                              to
                                             the
                                            child
                                               as
                                              you
                                            sang
                                              to
                                              me




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  1. Date: 8/28/2010 9:19:00 PM

    OH, how lovely a thought of how he became robin redbreast, Daniel. such creativity! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 1:53:00 PM

    I finished the easy cheesy poem...let me know if it is too stupid??

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 7:05:00 AM

    So nice to see u on my comments page again Daniel.. hope it will be a daily occurrence now that u are posting again.. with luv..ciao..

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 7:01:00 AM

    This is an inspiring "shape" poem, Daniel. Please send that robin my way. I would love to hear it sing. Beautiful writing, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 1:25:00 PM

    enjoyed!

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 1:07:00 PM

    AWESOME and so good to see u back Daniel..my friend.. have missed your intense poetry ... this one is a perfect concrete piece with a phenomenal message so beautifully stated.. enjoyed my friend.. please keep in touch.. luv.. ciao...

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 12:31:00 PM

    Hello Daniel: What a wonderful poem of faith. Fantastic!!! Have a very good day. Yours truly: Sheol