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I'm not the woman for your silent happiness! And you already know............. Some preacher damned me and i'm crucified, black crows are digging in my soul. I know your anger,i'm the sacrifice so take a charcoal from my heart and draw me naked on our bedroom's wall than throw your knife and cut me deeper 'cause i won't breathe for you no more!

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  1. Date: 8/30/2010 10:36:00 AM

    Thank you Linda-Marie!However i don't think i'm very good at writing in english,it's hard for me because i'm bulgarian.But i just wrote this one in english i don't know why?!I'm using english in facebook ,i usually write in bulgarian but i'm not a good translator and i'm afraid that my poems will loose their scence if i translate it ...Anyway thank you for your advice,i'm nwe here!I'll think about a title!:)

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 12:30:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight however u neglected to title this poem and readers will not be able to access it to read and comment.. luv..

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 5:09:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elina. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol