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Eden

rainbow colours been darken
in a world of confusion
question marks all around
no hope from the horizen

the bustling tulips are fading
by not so far from the distance
a tear drop falls lonely
by the misty heavens

sky is filled with anguish
hostile is far reaching
in a world once there was ambition
now knocks on gates of eden.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2010 1:42:00 PM

    Sirajali welcome to the soup. An Excellent write.

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 9:21:00 PM

    really nice, enjoyed it

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 9:21:00 PM

    So enjoyed your very creative write tonight.. with luv..