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Look At My Man-go!

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Look At My Man-go!

Look at my magnificent man.
So sweet and sultry and always has a plan.
Every lovely layer I pull back I find gold
When God gave me this glorious man He broke the mold.

Walking and whistling is what he does with ease.
He's always so sweet and satisfying to please.
Taking a bite out of him and take a trip to the dentist.
Any girl would be lucky to be on his love list.

However, this heavenly dream has become just mine.
He's a walking dish---so delicious and divine!
He became such a special surprise on those sultry summer days.
So refreshingly refining that he put me in a haze.

Others I find ogling at my oh so original man.
It used to brutally bother me but, now I understand---
Not many have such a sweet man to go home to.
But ladies, I'll let you look just once, and that's all I can do.

Ladies, I'll give a little advice on landing a good man.
Appreciate all his attributes, even the ones you can't stand.
His sweetness and his smile will always satisfy you.
Bumps and bruises in life will come, so learn to appreciate them too.




















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  1. Date: 9/9/2010 11:09:00 AM

    Congratulations Brandee on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 8:02:00 PM

    I loved reading this the first time. Congrats for making it in the contet! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 9:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with this beautiful poem..

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 7:43:00 AM

    Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write and win to enjoy this holiday with luv..

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 5:53:00 PM

    Love the alliteration here and lovely rhyming stanzas. Nicely done! hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 7:45:00 PM

    thankxxx for supporting my contest Brandee ..goodluck with luv..

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 7:28:00 PM

    oh, I am so bad, Brandee. I often do not even look at the titles, that is why I didnt' see it. Very interesting how yu worked that in!

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 11:59:00 PM

    Nicely done, Brandee! He sounds deLISH (but what fruit is he?) You gotta get that in somewhere, if it's for the contest. Thanks for your sweet comment to my poem. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 8:06:00 PM

    Wonderful use of alliteration - well expressed thoughts on your man, Brandee

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 7:20:00 PM

    Brandee, yes where indeed. loved it, glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat