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My Moon

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My Moon

Like the moon 
In the night sky 
Controlling the tide 
You are the celestial body 
That pulls 
My emotional side
Gives life to my ocean 
Wannna take you for a ride 
Across the universal divide 
Show you all the beauty 
Of you and me 
Interlock eternally 
Just like nuclear fusion 
The energy of unison 
Will create a 
Certain kind of love 
Those mere mortals
Can only dream of 
So this slam is for you p.d.
The only one 
With the inner beauty 
That can move me 
Soothing me 
With the continuity 
Of the flow 
Between me and you 
Continuously  
Expressing 
The bond of affection 
With a positive light 
Just like the moon 
In the sky at night 
I'm way over my head
The feelings you compose


(dedicated to the P.D.)





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  1. Date: 11/19/2010 3:14:00 PM

    LOL;-) at the bottom funny comment. Hi Nathan, I love the num. my ??? well P.D. did with your moon poem. You guy's belong;-) no doubt about it. Love =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 10:43:00 PM

    that was simply wonderful. I found it refreshing to hear a man be that good with words

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 4:17:00 PM

    Nat, this is RHYME or verse...definitely not free verse for it's full of rhyming words...free verse has NO rhyme, okies? fine write just chnage the form name...Roger Dodger over and out!

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:10:00 AM

    I love this one Babe, dedicated to the only moon you need. I hope she is not better than me your perfect ocean...xoxoxoxoox,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 6:10:00 AM

    a beautiful beast

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 12:19:00 AM

    wow! Nathan, trulllllyyy does touch the land below. I super love this one.. This is one of your best poems,..xoxo,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 1:53:00 AM

    Wow! babe, I love being your perfect ocean and the right size moon. You are handing me to many over whelming emotions, and i love them,, I love the style, and the energy behind your inspiration,.xoxooxoxoxoxoox,.love p.d.