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Illusion Illuminated

Illusion illuminated instantly
Reality realized… rationally
Nature noticed normally
Vision vitalized vibrantly
Life lived… laudably

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  1. Date: 11/16/2010 8:32:00 PM

    nice piece here my friend thank you

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 10:40:00 AM

    Enjoyed your poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 12:42:00 PM

    Awesome write Adeleke :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 9:32:00 AM

    Wonderful alliteration...Soupmail!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 5:56:00 AM

    Wonderful write that shared today...very enjoyed always Michael

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 7:41:00 AM

    Great alliteration, such a sweet write. Emily

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 3:56:00 AM

    Short and really sweet.U dey rep naija wella

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:47:00 AM

    excellent Alliteration, enjoyed this. Harry

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:29:00 PM

    Life, you spoke of life and it's moments. A poem that goes into my favourites, a poem, that with complete and utter honesty, is one of the best I have ever read. Keep smiling, Sami.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:41:00 AM

    Cool Alliteration, Adeleke. You coverered all points very well. Thanks for your comments today, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:01:00 PM

    Adorable alliteration Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 5:43:00 PM

    great alliteration...enjoyed!

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 3:31:00 PM

    Very pretty flow Adeleke... I have a poem entitle the same thing .. luv alliteration for titles .. I use that a lot too... we need to have an alliteration contest..my friend.. see soup mail please.. kinda urgent.. don't understand .. confused.. with a comment..luv.. ciao..

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 12:50:00 PM

    Incredible alliteration, Adeleke. And I admire your reality-based, yet joyful perspective on life. Really enjoyed the poem on your blog as well. Love, Carolyn