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Illusion Illuminated

Illusion illuminated instantly
Reality realized… rationally
Nature noticed normally
Vision vitalized vibrantly
Life lived… laudably

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  1. chappell Avatar
    duncan ceizar chappell
    Date: 11/16/2010 8:32:00 PM
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    nice piece here my friend thank you

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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 10/4/2010 10:40:00 AM
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    Enjoyed your poem~SKAT
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 8/25/2010 12:42:00 PM
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    Awesome write Adeleke :)
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    Tirzah Conway
    Date: 8/25/2010 9:32:00 AM
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    Wonderful alliteration...Soupmail!~Tirzah~
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 8/25/2010 5:56:00 AM
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    Wonderful write that shared today...very enjoyed always Michael
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    DE R
    Date: 8/23/2010 7:41:00 AM
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    Great alliteration, such a sweet write. Emily
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    OPEMIPO AKINSOYINU
    Date: 8/22/2010 3:56:00 AM
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    Short and really sweet.U dey rep naija wella
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/20/2010 12:47:00 AM
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    excellent Alliteration, enjoyed this. Harry
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    Sami Al-khalili
    Date: 8/19/2010 11:29:00 PM
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    Life, you spoke of life and it's moments. A poem that goes into my favourites, a poem, that with complete and utter honesty, is one of the best I have ever read. Keep smiling, Sami.
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    john freeman
    Date: 8/19/2010 10:41:00 AM
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    Cool Alliteration, Adeleke. You coverered all points very well. Thanks for your comments today, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses
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    Debbie Lee
    Date: 8/18/2010 9:01:00 PM
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    Adorable alliteration Adeleke
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 8/18/2010 5:43:00 PM
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    great alliteration...enjoyed!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 8/18/2010 3:31:00 PM
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    Very pretty flow Adeleke... I have a poem entitle the same thing .. luv alliteration for titles .. I use that a lot too... we need to have an alliteration contest..my friend.. see soup mail please.. kinda urgent.. don't understand .. confused.. with a comment..luv.. ciao..
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 8/18/2010 12:50:00 PM
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    Incredible alliteration, Adeleke. And I admire your reality-based, yet joyful perspective on life. Really enjoyed the poem on your blog as well. Love, Carolyn


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