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sOmething

yOur telling me I'm gOing crazy
but dOn't you think this a i r ' s amazing

yOu lOOk at me as if I'm gOing u
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but I'm enjoying all this WONDER

yOu stOpped believing in your life
yOu hesitate the mOrning strife
yOu ignOre all the if's and maybe's
yOu just believe that lOve is p a c i n g

I like the feel of earth unstill
I like to feel the when will; chill
I like to knOw that I know nOthing
Instead Of lOOking fOr that sOmething...

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 11:32:00 PM
    Under...Sweet! Nice placement and spacement, 'specially puttin' under in the BASEMENT! WuRD! ~JS Lambert

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:12:00 AM
    Hi Jessica :) this is a cool write, especially enjoyed how you formatted the word "under"-- as well as the spaces in pacing-- wonderful way of thinking as well, I could relate -- & haha you are funny for a while there I thought you were writing (my name's been rhymed with biko as well, a type of rice cake here) a poem for the Name Game song-- ;) you could I think you'd do great with it! enjoy your day!! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 2:48:00 PM
    awsome poem indeed I love the way you word it out in general

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 9:11:00 AM
    enjoyed this very creative poem. thank you for sharing it with us. i liked the spacing in between p a c i n g for effect.

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 11:44:00 AM
    I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Jessica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 7:18:00 AM
    Unique and creative Jessica.. your words speak volumes in this piece.. and the accent with the caps is defining.. great piece my friend.. happy week with luv..

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 2:11:00 AM
    Great write x sarah x

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 1:09:00 AM
    Ps. Smile ~ I hope that "You" didn't mind all of my "YOU"'s but, I felt a tad bit crazy tonight, thinking about "YoOoUuu" ~ Smile, "Beautiful Dreams to 'You, Beautiful Jessica Arteaga;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 1:04:00 AM
    ~ "YOU" should already know this too; my hearts sincerest carings for "YOU" ~ I love as Always, the creativity of what "YOU" always seem to create upon these canvas' "YOU" paint dear ~ And the message amid the muse here is, "BEAUTIFUL" ~ "My Love to 'YOU ALWAYS,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Bright &, 'Somethings Beautiful Day, Dear;" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 12:55:00 AM
    Smile ~ "Jessica" ~ "Beautiful Jessica" ~ "O" ~ Smile, personally dear, I am just trying to love All; while waiting for the clarity of reclaimed time; to reclaim the filling of these eyes....Smile, its Always soo good to see "YOU!!!" ~ Did I ever tell "YOU" that? Do I need to tell "YOU" that? Smile, I hope not!!! ~ So how are "YOU?" ~ Well I hope but ~ ....Cont:)