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Seen????

A door and a window
Will show your shadow
All deeds in a row
The correct seen it show
Where sun plays see-saw
Where night show its show
Where birds sing their vow
Where trees spreads shadow

                                    by:-
                                    Vrushani Thaker

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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 5:42:00 PM

    This is unusal, but I like it. It is a difficult form to categorize, but it is not easy on the surface to do it and you have... Thank you for your kindness. REgards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 11:04:00 AM

    Nice Poem and beautiful expression of words. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra.......Vrushani Thaker