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The Forest Green....

As early dawns sunlight, of golden glass....

Now drips from the ambient forest of green

Showers of light reflected, from across the pond

Gazing amid the cabins threshold; these love laced thoughts

A nightingale lingering; singing atop the windows ledge
 
Faraway whispers, from the preludings winds of time....

Ushering these images, beyond the corridores of ones soul

Still waters resurgent; resplendent, upon the silverish blue

Alluvions resillence, painted in criterion before my eyes

Lavishly renewed colours, brushed gently this heart of mine....

Fireflies and butterflies, floating through the turquoise sky

Melodies atop this brilliant canvas', carousels of life ~

But, as the pendulums gravities of truth sway inside my mind

I find myself within a fortitude of ponder; fortified
 
By the realization that not all is fairytales and or, ice cream rides....

Pestilence of plights befalling millions and who's wrong or right?

Thus in the referendum of self, one must choose and decide

The ways of justice, balanced upon the scales of conscious

Betwixt the pabulums dividing lines of love and hate?

And a poet writes....

Peering across the pond unto the other side

Beautiful faces beautiful eyes, beautiful hearts and beautiful lives

Red Robins sing and White Swans they fly ~

Embracing them all; this knowing; these treasures inside!?

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The forest green....
                   


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  1. Date: 11/4/2010 9:35:00 AM

    Fireflies and butterflies, floating through the turquoise sky... My two fav insects and my fav color. I love your poe, i always love the write which describes the beauty of the earth. Mr, Rhinem, thank you for your motivation on my poe. It's motivated me a lot. I just started to learn doing this, since english is not my native language but your comments are one thing that keeps me doing sharing my thought. thanks.

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 8:13:00 PM

    captivating, beautiful use of the english language, lyrical, I could go on forever! John! what a delight to read! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 3:56:00 PM

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  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:14:00 PM

    I'm sure everywere in God's universe, these gems you write, when read by others resound throughout! And since you touch the hearts of many I can only imagine how nature responds to these wonderful expressions from your heart! I hope some lucky students at some university have access to your exceptional gift, John. Regardless, it's not wasted! You ROCK, guy!! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 8:34:00 AM

    You have sketched a matchless beauty in this very lovely and sweet poem. Very inspiring to read with fabulous imagery and great contrasts. The idea of this side and that side is beautiful and great, showing the depths of your poem. Love and good wishes always.......Ravindra.........John Rhimen.

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 5:28:00 PM

    i too ponder the things on the other side. the desolation the povertyover there. the selfishness and the greed and exploiters over here. stealing what is beautiful from over there and bringing it over here. the diamonds and the gold. and now they want to dig on our soil, a hole so deep in the gulf deep enough to find liviathone. we too shall be devastated and starving. our land striped of it's food for the silence we kept while they ravaged the poor. we should change while the forest is still gr

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 3:15:00 PM

    Awesome poem Thanks for your comment

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 2:59:00 PM

    This is very nicely said.Thank you for taking time to read my poems.Thank you for the comment on my name to.If you get a chance take a look at some of my other poems and tell me what you think.Hope all is well with you and have a great day.

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 12:44:00 PM

    Very inspiring to read, John, with fabulous imagery and you let the reader what you see as far as the choice and decision you make. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:00:00 AM

    Hi John! This wonderful poem of yours is just teeming with beautiful imagery-- definitely enjoyed reading this and you also gave such a contrast to it-- very nicely done-- I hope you are enjoying your day as well-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 9:31:00 PM

    You always have such kind words to share~thank you soooooo much!!~a lovely write you have penned. blessings to you and yours~have a inspirational evening!!!!!~Your friend Rick

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 6:59:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem, John! And yes we can be friends again. Have yourself a nice and lovely day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 3:25:00 PM

    "The artist of the beautiful." Nice work, John. AS regards "Opinion," it is just that, an opinion, which, unfortunately, is not shared by the vast majority of souls on this planet. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 2:52:00 PM

    A veritable FEAST of language and imagery, lovingly portrayed! BRAVO my dear friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 1:55:00 PM

    Dear John, thanks for remembering "John's Aramis." I can't believe you remembered it all this time. Of course, I'll never forget the scent. Men are still wearing it and when one passes by wearing Aramis, it always takes me back to a special warm place in my heart. Thank you, John. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 6:50:00 AM

    yesterday i had a headache and couldn't read this lovely poem. thats a lovely piece of writing John nd thank you for putting a smile on my face.....

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 2:01:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery, my friend John..as usual. Nature is a beautiful and complex source of inspiration ...Lovely write KIsses, Emily

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 9:54:00 PM

    What a touching and introspective poem. I loved the imagery. The line of fireflies and butterflies is beautiful. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 8:21:00 PM

    so very beautiful and enticing words that flow gently throughout,, always a pleasure to read your words,,thank You for your more then kind comments that you leave behind after reading my words,,,Blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 6:06:00 PM

    John, you have filled this page with some powerful and stirring details, all over again. You have the wonderful details, but yet you are still able to intermesh some darker, vexing questions about our modern ways and morality. Well done~Chris

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 5:09:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive write that was almost like being there...Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 4:46:00 PM

    Yes, what Sara said, perfect beauty here, john. Glad you found my grocery poem funny. Yeah, those gay produce. What will they say and do next? Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 12:54:00 PM

    perfect beauty ... sarah x soup mail x

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 8:31:00 AM

    A beautiful write with perfect images John, thanks for your kind comments, enjoy your Monday ~ Wilma

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 6:04:00 AM

    This is so absoluely beautiful~ John~ why would you consider this wonderful poetry in the category of I Do Not Know~ that is so sad to me~this a lyricical poem and a very very good one, each word captivated me~~ love Constance

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 10:31:00 PM

    Thank you so much John for the beautiful comments left on my poetry,you have made me feel absolutely wonderful this evening.

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 7:38:00 PM

    What beautiful images you give us in this wonderful poem, dear friend. I felt like I was watching the fireflies, the carousels and the birds right by your side. Vivid descriptions captured masterfully, John! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 12:20:00 PM

    Your words send shivers through my pulses amazing lines ,and thank you so very much for your lovelly comments I am blushing for such a talented poet as yourself to remark so deep on my lines all my love sarah x

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 5:21:00 AM

    Very beautiful,An artist which paints wonderful through verse.Those fireflies,butterflies,those carousels,those cabins,the forest,the sky,beautiful. .almost a living fairytale.Great work!Tmfvs!Celene!

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 11:51:00 PM

    this is very beautiful John, so much imagery you have written and describe could make one's heart swell more than needed, and I love how you break away form the imagery to thought of other things of the world as a person would do gazing, thought seems to interrupt moments of watching doesn't it? c: great poem

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