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A Performance

Pain
brings a
momentous
performance by
the introduction
of excruciating
dancing between nerve endings
followed by tourniquet twisting
when muscles scream out a crescendo
and the mind closes the curtain on pain.

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  1. Date: 1/19/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Wishing you would grace us with some new poetry soon. You are missed Sue. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 4:17:00 PM

    wow,it's quite a performance all right and one i am so happy to miss if i can. This is great etheree , Sue. Where are you?

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 5:59:00 PM

    wow excellent write my friend thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:26:00 AM

    No pain no gain? Maybe. A write as thought-provoking it is, a write that I am still reading over and over again. A write written with greatness. Love, Sami.

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 3:47:00 PM

    Good use of this challenging form to show the sacrifice behind the performance. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 4:12:00 AM

    nice form of etheree,, enjoyed your write..P.D.

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:24:00 PM

    Feeling of pain nicely penned, sue