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,,,COLOR,,,,

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,,,COLOR,,,,

               CRAYON 

You can find me in the zoo. 
Never  will I be the beauty of a  peacock.
I do not match with color blue.
I can be the color of a rock.
I am not the color that stands out to you.

My best friend is color green.
We make mother nature feel complete.
The color of the ocean is my enemy.
Drowning land taking away my color of space.
You find my color in chocolate, on a baby face. 

You find my roots deep in a forest.
I provide you shelter with the color of my wood.
My soils give you the beauty of a florist. 
My color can be changed from bad to good.
A simple color never understood

80% of of my eye color dominate the rest.
Before the butterfly leaves its cocoon
I support the bird in its nest.
I raised the pecan to seed with the moon.
A certain color that carries no tune.

My color is stored in a snickers candy bar.
A color that is not so pretty, but can be very sweet.
It can be worst, I can be  the color of tar.
I am the dark brown dirt under every ones feet.
Kidnap by the drains of water like thieves

Brown the color so messy, but yet so neat.
Brown I am as the deep blue sea.

By; P.D.

((p.s. just trying out something 
besides Free Verse,,lol,,and Slam))

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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:33:00 PM
    This is a creative, imaginative, unique and intriguing poem. The imagery allows the reader to actually see whats in your mind nice job

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:35:00 PM
    PD. I just saw that Nathan does not have poems up any more? What happened? WEll, could you let him know thanks for my win? I am so glad he liked my Pearl poem. REmember it was originally for a contest that never got judged?? that one called Midnight Pearl

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, PD! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "The Colors Have It" contest P.D..... You need to enter more contests. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:46:00 PM
    Congrats on an awesome win!- JH

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, P.D. Your comments are as sweet as your avatar pic. Is that ur daughter?

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Congratulations yet again on another smashing win xx

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 3:30:00 AM
    Congrats pd..a colorful write indeed, jag

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:15:00 PM
    oooh this is really good P.D...congrats on your win...and YEAH BROWN RULES!!!...;)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:57:00 PM
    Irma, wow, I am glad to see this one again here in the winners' list of the color contest. I too entered an oldie of mine. your choice was unique and very well described. One of your best poems, sweetie. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:39:00 PM
    Yeah PD brown is you, earthy and so rich.. I was completely immersed in the lines here you wrote... You have a big fan here!!! CONGRATS!!! Love....

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:06:00 PM
    congrats PD my BDF on a super spectacular write ad win luv.. leave it to u to leave us all breathless while reading..oh.. bff forever..

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:41:00 PM
    YEAH...ME

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 11:27:00 AM
    You are holy like a child, you have much strength, I can feel with my null sense. Loved and enjoyed lately, sorry myself, bl

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:37:00 PM
    from my grandfather most of us inhereted a blue ring around our eye but you have to look closely to see it. would you like to see it? tron? jhl

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:42:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care! All the best to you!~Chris

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 7:37:00 PM
    this is so creative!!I love colors :D thanks for always checking my poems and the sweet words :D 80% of of my eye color dominate the rest. Before the butterfly leaves its cocoon I support the bird in its nest. I raised the pecan to seed with the moon. A certain color that carries no tune. This is deep..don't know how u thought of that :D

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 4:31:00 PM
    Hey P.D. my BBF.. I tried to leave a message on Nate's part of this collab ..he must have my name blocked inadvertently from soup mails... could u let him know to check his blocked poets please and remove me.. unless he is mad at me for something??? luv..

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 5:30:00 AM
    You are wonderful friend, well pen love--------------------kelechi

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 8:32:00 PM
    What up? see your on the creative side once again. Keep up the great work:) have a nice day.

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