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Stars Go To Sleep

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Below is the poem entitled Stars Go To Sleep which was written by poet Mohammad Yamin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Stars Go To Sleep

Stars! Why be awake with me
Hit the bed and go to sleep
You are not enslaved by agony but free
My bleeding soul’s wounds are deep

Through my open window you peep
With your twinkling searching eyes
Your glow in my gloomy nights creep
With the grace of the fireflies

Someone gifted me sleeplessness
And  rewarded me with anguish
My nights darkness and gloom dress
Like out of water fish I languish

Why be overly worried for me
A day may return my deserted sleep
Setting from the bondage my soul free
When that happens you must not weep.

Stars! I beseech go to sleep!  

 

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  1. Date: 1/15/2012 6:32:00 PM
    so much passion in this conversation-like-dream words, sir. The desperation becomes beautiful till the end. Thank you for your visit and kind comments. Looking forward to read more of your wonderful poems.

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    Date: 1/16/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your kind words, mia. Do read my other poems. I am sure they will not disappoint your high degree of sensitivity. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 12/28/2011 1:04:00 PM
    Hi Mohammed, Thank you for your kind comment regarding my poem. I read a few of your poems and really enjoyed them. I do enjoy rhyme and your choice of words is excellent. Cheers, Maureen

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 9:44:00 AM
    such a nice write, I bet you could write a good one with rhyme INSIDE of a line, kinda like your "You are not enslaved by AGONY but FREE" this could be seen as internal half rhyme [repeating the long E sound] Please consider entering my contest The Rhyme Inside..Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 10:59:00 AM
    another instant masterpiece!

  1. Date: 3/13/2011 1:23:00 PM
    Great one ...I get that feeling some on those sleepless nights..Congratulations..Sara

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 3:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mohammad. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 1:51:00 AM
    Good stuff, congrats!

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 11:29:00 AM
    Many congratulations Mohammad on this fine piece being featured, deservedly so. Many thank you's for your always kind words on my poems....:)

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 3:45:00 PM
    Congrats Mohammad on "Stars Go To Sleep" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 11:02:00 AM
    Well Done I have always seen a starry night, within the walls of my sorrow, as heavens angels smiling on my weary soul Love Cookie

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 11:06:00 AM
    Expressing your anguish so deep--still caring for the stars to sleep...Excellent write. I must say that you write from the depth of your heart.Thanks for your comments and specially for sending me the quatrain ---it's a great gift to me. I liked it very much. Your sensitivities are highly appreciable...rohini

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 9:09:00 AM
    well writen and thought of. i liked most of the images that you associated with sleep. good job. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 11/13/2010 12:52:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. The emotion comes through your words. You made my day with your kind comment on my poem. Thank you so much. Wishing you life's best. Karen

  1. Date: 10/20/2010 12:11:00 PM
    brilliant beautiful write! love it. thank you for your comments on my poem. best wishes, Taha

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:48:00 AM
    I might try looking at the stars next time I can't sleep. I usually stare at the ceiling. Torture long sleepless nights. Well done beautifully done. Thank you Monica

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 10:52:00 PM
    NICE ONE, ENJOYED YOUR THE READ -SKAT