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Dreadful Dream

Dreams can be
Good to heaven
Bad to hell
I had a dream 
Very very dreadful
It started houseful
With cries rule
I had lost my mother
I was steady still
People console me
Around but no result
Instead of people around
I was left all alone
The imagination without her
Had shot circuited me
Who will come to cheer me?
Who will love priceless to me?
Who will fight for me?
I was in real also 
Kept crying in night
Waked up! The moment 
I realized it was dream 
I was left smiling
Happy to see her
That day changed 
My attitude towards her
I am more respectful, polite
And happy ti have her.

                                   by:-
                                   Vrushani Thaker 

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  1. Date: 7/26/2010 12:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem Vrushani in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 12:10:00 PM

    oh, gosh, VRUSHANI, you should see how I mangle my students' names. I teach englsh to foreign students and I can't even pronounce half their names, let alone spell them. And I bet our English names are hard for you as well! (unless you live here in the US?) sorry how I spelled your name. Also my eyes do not see words super well. I have a bit of far sightedness at the computer! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 9:42:00 AM

    Congrats on your big win in John's contest Vrushani with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy your victory dance at the winners circle for a top spot.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 10:03:00 PM

    I bet it felt good to wake from that, Virushani, congatulations on your Honorable Mention in john's contest. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 9:41:00 PM

    Congratulations, Vrushani. On your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 9:29:00 PM

    What a lovely ending and I am so happy that one was a dream.. Congratulations. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 6:45:00 PM

    Dreams work wonders- thanks!

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 1:16:00 PM

    lovely,just lovely ending to the dream!