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Bloom

Oh, at last I bloom
I don't have to beg for bees
they're surrounding me!

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 8:38:00 AM

    Just reviwing my fav poems list. this is as standout for me as ever! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 6:14:00 PM

    Love it Juan, a very creative bright flower it is.. pollen attract them buzzing bees no need to beg,..LeeAnn

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:19:00 PM

    WONDERFUL. A FAV for this beauty!

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 1:04:00 PM

    Oh, I can relate to this one. The scene comes alive through your words. I've been away from the site so I apologize for now responding earlier. Thank you for all the kind comments on my poems. They are greatly appreciated. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 3:47:00 PM

    I love Haiku's I enjoye this one very much, Juan. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 2:37:00 AM

    very cute haiku Juan! enjoyed how all those bees are swarming now-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 8:46:00 AM

    Lovely penned Haiku, Juan and thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Have a nice week ahead!...Gert

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 6:22:00 AM

    A nice thought well penned.

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 4:58:00 AM

    Well done my friend..

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 4:17:00 AM

    lovely,flowery honeyed haiku. .Celene!