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Dream girl in true life!!!!!!!

A girl I had seen
Beautiful as rose
Shining as sun
Glancing at me 
With eyes big brown
Into the dreams 
She came once
Days passed and
Married I was
With a girl beautiful
As in my dreams
Face was forgotten 
But beauty was eternal
And my wife was equal 
So I wonder if 
She was the same!


                                         by:-
                                         Vrushani Thaker

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  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:54:00 AM

    Congratulations Vrushani on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 2:09:00 PM

    Congrats Vrushani on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. an amazing write.. wonderful win.. enjoy your special honor.. with luv today ..my friend..

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 10:43:00 PM

    great write! we all want that one girl man trust me, keep it up and thanks for the comments.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:13:00 AM

    Nice one to read ..starting off my day so fine.. with your poetry.. u should enter in IS SHE THE ONE contest posted.. u never know what the sponsor is looking for ..so check it out.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 8:20:00 AM

    thank you for correcting me. I see that now.. i was going by the beauty of your poem,,and also the ending and the tittle,,,(((((But beauty was eternal And my wife was equal So I wonder if She was the same! ))))))).. that is the phrase that got my attention,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 3:05:00 AM

    you know this poem is beautiful and the ending was like magic,, asking if your wife was your dream girl,,enjoyed it,..p..d

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 9:34:00 PM

    I like this one. It makes me wonder how many times I got what i was yearning for, then got it and through it away. Nice write

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 2:40:00 PM

    very lyrical!

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 1:10:00 AM

    pretty poem, enjoyed reading today and thanks for your kind cmments on my works.

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 11:15:00 PM

    What a beauty. .gave me goose pimples..She must have been the same girl all along,lovely!Celene!