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"When The Crow's Bite's"

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"When The Crow's Bite's"

Don't open your eyes, selected to be the prize of existence, run forward, fight them all,
kill with no pity either mercy, engrave the death of the love one's on their forehead, let
them die cold, blood for wine in their final minute, raining for life, running away from
the eyes of the clouds, remain to bee seen, desperately fighting the sky with no chance to
survive the fact of dying, thinking is the only way, vow at his feet's, vow at his anger,
evil aura made flesh, so many soldiers dead, suicide, the bomb makes the boom at midnight,
crow's are up in the air, defending themself's from the wrath of humankind, we place blame
on them for biting of the eyes of the witness, say goodbye to cute little world, is over
now, holds hands tight with your beloved, there's not much time, say what you will because
there's no tomorrow,  food is gone, water dries fast, trees intoxicated with our
behaviors, the air feels cold dead poisoned, deceived again and again one more time wont
hurt no one, but it kill's, it takes away our last breath, essence leaving from night to
day, we all desire death, pray for death, only child's are playing hide and seek with the
devil on the devils house, it must hurt deep everytime you hear them scream and cry the
loved night ahead, mourning the witness, mourn his name, learn to cry like a man, learn to
accept it hurts you the most, only for then pure betrayal cry's the hate, god ain't with
us tonight, only the devil taking away the last breath we got, this is the day, the day
the crow's show how much they were able to wait for this brilliant and beatiful day, why
now the beast rips his horns, his name cuted on the chest, no need to ask were the
cerberus came, tell the child's to say goodbye, tonight the world end's for good, no
tomorrow, no hate, only love for the dead and wrecked soul.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2010 7:16:00 AM

    Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Derek. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 3:33:00 PM

    So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 12:42:00 PM

    suprer deep,, powerful on the darkside,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.