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Without You I Am Lost

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Below is the poem entitled Without You I Am Lost which was written by poet Marycile Beer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Without You I Am Lost

My friends at poetrysoup 
Keep pushing me on
I stop to take a deep breath 
And Daniel Larson might say "What's next"

I'll write about a bird, a sea gull 
Circling our Wyoming earth
Vince Suzadail Jr. might comment
"Come on you can do better than that" 

Alright the buffalo outside my door
John Loving III might say
"Him again "
"We've heard of him before"

I'll write about my rocks
And Carol Brown might say
"Come on give us something
To knock our sox off"

Bob Hinton said, "Best to you"
But wait were those the words
Or was it 
"At least try to do your best"

Karen O'Leary said, "I Missed you
Hope you had a wonderful holiday and_"
Here I held my ears,
I didn't want to disappoint her, and I wiped my tears.

Mike Falatico, Jimbo Goff
Christie Mills and Earl Brown too
They all work so hard
And I talk about the zoo

I love you all, You are my family and friends
Or I would never have tried to write
This silly little poem 
And not worry about being sued

But your encouragement 
Helps to move me on 
Without your honest words
I'd not get any enjoyment from my works.

Cile Beer

I really do get encouragement from your comments. 
And I try to do my best to help keep our poetrysoup family
strong. Thanks for all your help. God Bless, Cile

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  1. Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 AM

    What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Cile. Always a pleasure to read your writes. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 7:28:00 PM

    A nice feelings for the poets who encourage you.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:55:00 PM

    So enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight .. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:52:00 PM

    it's good to know that i'm in the top three. jhl

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:48:00 PM

    Great write that honors those of poetry soup. Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 3:46:00 PM

    yeah baby! yeah baby!! YEAH BABY!!!