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AFLAME


Tonight, the horizon burns like metal 
Molted and shot from a mouth of fire 
The trees stand scorched, coal-chalked pictures 
In the sky hangs a fleeting smile 
Molted and shot, from a mouth of fire 
Twisted from wire, but tender, yet to be shaped 
In the sky hangs a fleeting smile 
The work of an artist, holding beauty in crude hands 
Twisted from wire, but tender, yet to be shaped – 
The trees stand, scorched coal-chalked pictures 
The work of an artist holding beauty, in crude hands 
tonight. The horizon burns like metal. 

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  1. Date: 7/17/2010 11:17:00 PM

    You are so good, Grace!! Thanks for your comment to me today. I love this poem of yours. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 8:50:00 AM

    a passionate write,, this was a cool write,, nice one...P.D.

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 7:45:00 AM

    Touches the readers senses with such vivd imagery, nice write.