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Gotch Ya

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Gotch Ya

I need to write a poem today
One that will blow your mind away
It must be wild and serene
But that won't fit into this scene

It must be active, visual too
Like something I'd do at the zoo
Maybe, I'll pretend I've got the flu
But that won't work you'd stay away too

Oh my, There's stars, clouds and mountains tall
Oceans or grass to catch your fall
But then, how do I get up high
Now that I've got your attention, I'll fly

Now that you are here with me
I'll zoom and soar and miss that tree
But if I don't what will WE do
Now I've got you thinking too

Thank goodness now that you came
My whole concept was to entertain
Now is the time to confess or admit
It's your turn cause, I'm getting air sick

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  1. Date: 7/12/2010 4:26:00 PM
    Interesting write...Sometimes we just have a hard time trying to decide a topic of interest on which to write...Sara

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 1:32:00 PM
    Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 6:33:00 AM
    This was a very fun, cute piece. I enjoyed reading this. It flowed well.

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 4:38:00 AM
    Thanks for the smiles :) I so needed this, God bless you Cile, Love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 8:36:00 PM
    excellet poem, with a sense of humour too! love it Harry

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 7:41:00 PM
    What a pick me upper of a poem, absolutely fabulous. You are such a warm - hearted person. Thanks for the smile. Ron

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 4:38:00 PM
    You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of rhyme. It was so good to see your name in my inbox. I've missed you and your humor. Keep your poems coming. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen