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SADDD

Finally broke down, played our song
All went well, then all went wrong
Your the only thing that I like about me
I listen to those words, and your all I can see
Patience people say, but I feel my patience is over
Getting back together, seems as impossible as the four-leaf-clover
Your hard to find, your as rare as a desert rose
A looker from your head to your toes
But waiting for you, is killing my heart
Tearing it up, and being torn appart
Tangled up in you, the words speak strong
But im giving up even if it may be wrong
I cant wait, I can barely sleep
Guess thats me, trying to start a knew leap
I need to move on, find something knew
Even if all I can think about, is only you

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  1. Date: 7/6/2010 3:31:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Trevor. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 5:16:00 PM
    Time does heal, you can even find someone next time that would care that much for you, also

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 4:09:00 PM
    Time heals..Hope that just a write and not your life..But if it is, it will get better..Keep the creative pen flowing for writing about it will help..Sara