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Blue Flame

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Blue Flame

Dancing on the coals
It curls its ribbon of blue
Hypnotic wonder. 

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  1. Date: 7/2/2010 5:12:00 PM

    This is such an excellent haiku. It's like being in India and watching a guru dancing on the hot coals. The imagery is just awesome. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 1:33:00 PM

    enjoyed reading today!

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 10:10:00 AM

    ohh,, cool write ,, nice..P.D.