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Suicide Masterpiece

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Suicide Masterpiece

Suicide Masterpiece

Sweat drop
On top
Trigger pop
Written note
All I got
Hang knot
Body rot
Suicide cop

I hope not
Cry out loud
I think not
Body's hot
I am too proud
I am loved a lot
Roof top.
Suicide bride

Heavy vain
Your game 
the same
Trapped shame
Gone insane
Who's to blame
Red stain
Suicide rain

Addictive dope
Needle hope
Poison taste
Drowning beer
Gun shot
Painless fear
Powder nose
Suicide dose

Razor blades
Flame stare
Pain fades
Sadden tear
Candle wax
Smoke dare
Burn down
Suicide flare

No bluff
No name
War zone
Innocent prey
Soul blown
Cry all day
Set mind
Suicide bomb

Terrorist 
traffic jam
Plane jack
Head strong
Help protect
Customs wrong
Dead plot
Suicide stop

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stop the suicide 

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 3:00:00 AM
    That was intense. Each group of words was a story in itself for one with imagination to decide. I have a big imagination so this got real sad. Thanks for the cheers. Have a merry Christmas Linda :) sorry about before it was not a good week. Peace.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 3:08:00 PM
    well crafted poem for the topic Linda....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:06:00 PM
    Wow....a lot to think about in this one...read a couple times...the lines that really got to me...red stain...suicide rain...cause I actually thought about what a mess I would leave when I tried to well ya know....congratulations Linda

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:43:00 PM
    big Congrats with this one in the contest, PD!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:15:00 PM
    yeah me.... LOL, PD

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:09:00 AM
    Hello, Is this the lady with the cherry on top, mmmmm looks delicious lol. Hi my Sweet Dark Friend, just looking at another of yours. Suicide, always a ponderance and sadness no matter the circumstances. Very good write on a difficult subject. Take care Richard.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:11:00 AM
    cool pattern and subject i can relate to as have been in this situation many a time in the past xx davidscott

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:55:00 PM
    This is a creative write here..I love the different scenarios of suicide..very in tuned with each of them.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:07:00 AM
    A real top notch write of all the possibilities of taking and doing away with, then followed by the fight for life when someone else decides to take a life which is not theres (or maybe including theres) suicide bomb just seems a disgusting title for someone whos dragging unsuspecting innocents with him... karen

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Very strong stuff here. I know suicide well as going boy I discovered my mother when I got home early from school. It leaves a hole in your heart that only the love of the Savior can come close to filling.

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 2:20:00 PM
    Powerful piece indeed, my friend

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 8:30:00 AM
    Dear Destroyer XX; I know that you can do this all day. But you know that in life their really is time for play! Good Tide-ing: Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Oh' Keep the write-up, up! Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up! Do it lightly and lively.

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 6:59:00 AM
    Outstanding write P.D. as usual! Your construction and creativity of such difficult topics continues to amaze me! You have been a FAV from the start. Thank you kindly for your words they mean so much to me. I am so happy you are feeling better; I prayed for you! So nice to know you...Your PS friend...Lay

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 3:31:00 AM
    this is very telling. especially about where the depresion comes from. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 7:07:00 PM
    Mad props for this one P.D. Touchy subject but the structure and message with your words make it hard not to read and enjoy. As always, you keep becoming my favorite all over again. GReat work my friend, GREAT!

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 6:28:00 AM
    WOW! Truly brilliant!! (";) I love it! amzie

  1. Date: 10/18/2010 12:43:00 PM
    i really like this one very unique , i enjoyed reading it thanks fr the connetb nellla

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 4:52:00 AM
    I've never seen poems like this one. Very original, profound and expressive. Thank you for commenting on my tanka. Olya

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 5:52:00 PM
    This write is amazingly deep. I've known ppl who struggle with this. You look at it from an angle I dare not think until now. Well done p.d you put alot on my mind.Thanks for the recent comments, continue with the great writes. Love, Jasmine

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