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This poem is stupid.. I was just being creative.. I used microsoft word 7 words

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This poem is stupid.. I was just being creative.. I used microsoft word 7 words

Imagine, you plus me
Picture, things we would see

Crop, all the bad things around
Edit, all the bad sounds

Paste, put two and two together
Cut, all the bad weather

Simplify, what life means to you
Redo, a past you once knew

Shape, a future into something you need
Insert, the words you plus me

Learn, our hearts as one
Finalize, what needs to be done

Review, the life that you once knew
Complete, you hear with the feelings that speak true

Finalize, Spell check all of your errors
Remember to remove all your fears

When your complete, and ready to be checked
Remember it was me, that you could always connect

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  1. Date: 6/23/2010 4:48:00 AM
    One; Never, never call your work 'stupid' You can say it is silly, or, something you're having fun with, but to say it is stupid, strikes me as being self-derogotory. There's plenty of people in the world that wouldn't mind to do that job, without you even having to ask. For two; "Complete, you hear with the feelings that speak true" Maybe re-work it slightly to be a word/two shorter? All-in-all, I like this! Excellent imagination, and good basic writing skills:)Please, continue your writing