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I am

A collected experience
filmed in memories
A fate's product
plus the sum of all my choices

An unfinished book
written by myself
A story, a novel, a play
to be ended by death

I am a child, a parent, a grandparent
a trilogy of generation
The current story of mankind
A sequel of the ages...

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  1. Date: 7/24/2010 7:11:00 AM
    Wow! This is an awesome write! I love it! Very well done, Juan. ...Thanks for the reading and commenting on my work : )

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 12:16:00 PM
    Juan, I like your novel. It doesn't play around it just tests us and lets us make a choice for the for the final chapter. Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 11:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Juan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 7:28:00 AM well done. Congrats on the selection. Love. daver

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 10:38:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week - enjoyed it immensely. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 10:13:00 AM
    Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.

  1. Date: 6/26/2010 8:46:00 AM
    What a wonderful way of describing yourself, Juan! I especially enjoyed how you described yourself in your first stanza :)-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2010 11:19:00 AM
    I like this Juan, very introspective. Sasha

  1. Date: 6/25/2010 2:50:00 AM
    Juan, I enjoyed your poem very much - 'filmed in memories' - very nice ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2010 5:05:00 AM
    Yes, you are the collection of your past and the present, and the great future...May you have a "Spiraling Universe" to occupy and create..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2010 3:48:00 AM
    Nice to see who you are. .You are talented!Celene!

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 7:47:00 PM
    Cool poem. I enjoyed.

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 5:12:00 PM
    cognito ergo sum!

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 4:12:00 PM
    Very nice, Can't wait to read more of your work! thanks for everything. LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 6:55:00 AM
    It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Juan. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 2:03:00 AM
    Interesting book, all this, and on the world stage also, excellent imagery on what life's all about awesome, Harry

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 11:02:00 PM
    :) Thanks for the comment I didn't think anyone would like because I haven't written anything in months great poem books are awesome and can lead to many adventures like our everyday lives. gratefully, Nemo

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 9:49:00 PM
    Very nice Juan, you are a very interesting boook. Checked out by many.. Love the sequel part parts.. Adds a lot more stories,, to in coming generations, Loved it Sidney LeeAnn

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 9:46:00 PM
    sounds beautiful.a book is always a mysterious when it is still unwritten. go on, get going.when the time is right. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 9:30:00 PM
    Nicely done..I especially like the last line.. Thank you for commenting on my poem. BG