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The struggling poet

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The struggling poet

I am a poet,
futile it may seem
in the realm
 I'm in
My word lost
its essence
against
the filtered ears
of the crowd,
It's subtle
as the mellow
gust of wind,
My words are frail,
for it can't pierce
the thickness
of your soul's wall
Wall thickened
by convention
your allowing,
But here i am,
striving to write
the song
 I'll be singing,
hoping to find in writing
what's my true meaning,
Though my song
is not sung
and its worth
is unseen
I'll continue
to write
till breath to me
will part
Hoping someday
that my words
will crush
the walls of your soul
burn the lace
of your limit
to free at last
your unsettled spirit!

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  1. Date: 6/23/2010 1:49:00 PM

    Yeah, or your own. A great write that I can very well relate to. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 1:30:00 AM

    u don`t need to struggle to all since ur poem is very powerful & u r really a wonderful poet.i like the last line"hoping ............spirit"

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 9:18:00 AM

    Words have such power as we poets all know. Great writing, Juan. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 4:37:00 AM

    WOW! I really liked this one Juan. Jeralynn

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 1:37:00 AM

    These words can pierce any soul's walls. .and so your song I am sure. .I'm glad my fingertips led me to read you Juan :) Celene!

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 10:31:00 PM

    VERY Very nicely written. I am impressed! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 2:48:00 PM

    Juan, their seems to be no strugle at all, i do however love the ending of your poem. Still i feel the spirit of the poet flowing in your poem, enjoyed,..p..d

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 1:26:00 PM

    Hi Juan, poetry is never futile, it will always touch the heart of someone. Keep writing, you're doing a great job. Enjoyed your poem very much ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 1:17:00 PM

    I love this write! The ending.. I know it will happen. Enjoyed every bit of this. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 7:27:00 AM

    Words do have the power to impact "the walls of the soul," Juan. And they certainly allow the writer's "unsettled spirit" to achieve some freedom. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 6:09:00 AM

    This one is especially good..I like the lines "it cannot pierce the thickness of the walls of your soul"...and also the last six lines...Do you think that the soul becomes harden from what we think or from not letting ourselves feel or acknowledging our emotions?..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 6:08:00 AM

    very well done...you writes are always a pleasure to read.. Michael

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 5:51:00 AM

    Nice inner thoughts well expressed