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War

War,war,war
Gives what?
Proves what?
Our win or their loss?
Both are equal....
We win nothing and they lose nothing.
War is a harm to humanity or
Ourselves.
War is a harm to ourselves not our enemies.
Why have war with ourselves?
When it gives us nothing but
Death of our brothers and sisters.
War is nothing but an action of harming
Each other.
War is not a win for us
But a loss for everybody.
War,war,war
Gives what?
Proves what?

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:24:00 AM

    My opinion is that war is a disease. One of the many ways divised by God for population control. Imagine a world where nobody dies from anything other than old age. At this point in history, we would probably have only a few square feet in which to live. That would mean no forests to provide the oxygen. Less space to grow the crops. Less clean water to quench the thirst of the thirsty. Less water and food to feed the beasts that feed us. If it were not for war and disease, we would be extinct.

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:37:00 PM

    It is just one of the ways to die dear new poet friend and its sad we may never be rid of it...welcome to soup, Light & Love

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 9/2/2012 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank u!
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 2:04:00 PM

    aweee... hi! Are you Yasmin Daughter... just wondering... I just looked at my winners,, and seen you dedicated your poem to her...I also have a daughter here on the soup... bye...pd

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 1:42:00 PM

    i am proud of you my wonderful daughter,truly i can now proudly say that you take after me.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 1:32:00 PM

    powerful words. you are exactly right. war is worthless. war is a politicians way of stroking his ego. old men talking and young men dying. war sucks. great write.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 10:19:00 AM

    this is wonderful, keep writing. Love, ADELEKE

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 10:11:00 AM

    wonderful poem,i simply loved it.