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Racing Thoughts

Listen …. Hear that?
Quiet
I’m all alone. No one here
(I hope she’s ok) Now I can write
Computer hum, traffic noise
	Hear that
Radio talking to me and
Selling me
(I hope she’s ok)
Something …
	Computer’s humming
And the Red Sox lost again
(Carry on my wayward son…)
She wants me to add her as a friend
No way! (I hope she’s ok)
Too ugly!
(Lay your weary head to rest…)
What’s this about the Patriots?
(I hope she’s ok) I missed it
(Once I rose above the noise and confusion)
(Please let it be easy for her!!!!)
Wow, it’s quiet around here
(Just to get a glimpse behind this illusion….)
Nice and quiet here today
What the hell was I doing?
(I hope she’s ok)

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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 10:26:00 AM

    Wow you have thoughts racing in your mind like horses on the track!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 9:02:00 AM

    Your thoughts sure are racing.. But it always go back to her.. Does that mean you really care about her well being? Interesting write ~ rgds WN

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 7:41:00 AM

    i also hope she's ok, who ever she is and whatever happens to her. you are making me curious about what happened to her. i have a feeling that she's undergoing a surgery, isn't she?? oh.. well this is really a racing thought.. yes, it's quiet on the outside but your mind is racing and never quiet. oh ya! i get it!! lol:) lizann