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SCATTERED


EMOTIONS BOUNCE IN THE OCEAN
FEELINGS ENCOMPASS THE CRAVE
CREATING WAVES
A SCATTERED MESS
RIPPLES OF DETEST
SCATTERED FEELINGS EVERYWHERE
TEARS FLOW INTO THE SEA REMEMBER ME
SCREAMING WITH TRANSPARENT SMILES ALL THE WHILE 
PLEADING WITH MIXED UP ENERGY MINGLED WITH MISERY
FOR A RIGHT NOW RESCUE
THIS IS AN EMERGENCY OF DEMAGED EMOTIONS
WITH THE NOTION THAT SOMEONE WOULD HAVE THE COGNITIVE TO SEE
THE PAIN THAT CAUSES THIS DISEASE
W3HILE YOUR ANALYZING MY SOUL IS DROWNING
HEAR THE SLIENT COUGHING....
I PLEAD FOR SOMEONE WITH CAPABILITIES
TO HEAL MY ACHING SOUL WITH THE ENORMOUS HOLE
A SCATTERED MESS.....................................

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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 9:19:00 AM

    Great Write Crystal.....Larry

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 5:22:00 PM

    Sometime's the mess is all we have to remind us, this write is full of sorrow, you'll get through it, just have some hope and happy thought, enjoyed your write..P.D.

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 3:36:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts that you have penned..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 3:22:00 PM

    Love the word usage...great flow.. Michael

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 3:15:00 PM

    Crystal, very emotional write, Awesome