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Raindrops

Raindrops
are like my thoughts
falling down into my mind
sending goose bumps down
my spine

Their cool aftermath
cleanses me of my thoughts
of fear and uncertainty 
about what tomorrows
pain may bring

They make me feel,
wet with creativity
drenched in my optimistic
illumination. glistening
raindrops, my thoughts
leave paths of pleasurable
distress, and hope of success
which road, less traveled
may be the best

Forget an umbrella
when these raindrops
arrive, I walk outside
arms open wide

Ready to Receive
whatever
the mind storm may bring
because raindrops are
as my thoughts, falling
down into my mind
sending shivers down
my spine

My brain, yearns
for the rain, to wash away
the pain, tomorrows worry
does bring
One special drop
could speed up life's clock
to the time
I can handle my own
and not dwell inside my controllers
home

For raindrops are,
like my thoughts
falling down into my mind
sending goose bumps
down my spine

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  1. Date: 6/21/2010 7:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Monsoon Storms" Heather. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 1:04:00 PM

    Congrats Heather on your winning poem in the Monsoon contest with this wonderful write and win..enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 5:31:00 PM

    I really dig this...open arms ready to recieve the rain instead of hiding from it under an umbrella. Very free. Chris.