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Gulf Blue Waters -- X X X

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Gulf Blue Waters -- X X X

A spec, lazily floating upon : “ The Gulf  Blue Water “
And then there were two specs, entwined together Spot
Black hole, in the Beauty of  “ The Gulf Blue Water “ 
A spec to a SPOT ( it even sounds so much Stronger )
When two Spots meet : Meld : Creating an “ Epic Drop “
Yet to the East, West, South, North  Thousands of Drops
Mixing and matching; Defiling “ The Gulf  Blue Water “
Let’s flash : To the future of the shore: Where Oysters Dance
As the alarm of “ Destruction” sounds off in “ Lazy Blue Waters
To the land and marshes : Prepare for Doom : from the “ Black Gulf Waters “
A Tsunami of Hell’s Fury Designed by Mankind’s “ Ignorance of Nature “
Who’s here to help us “ Marshland Security “ ASPCA “, The Government??

          Inspired by " Team POETRYSOUP'S Contest "Gulf Oil Spill"

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  1. Date: 9/25/2011 12:37:00 AM
    Hi! H.G., okay you gave me many poems to follow... Which i'm searching for right now... before i go to bed,... First i want to thank you for your lovely mail again. Than for the inspiration, that i should stay here on the soup longer... Thank you.... A great poem, for them GULF BLUE Waters... i live near them shores. Especially when all that chaos was going around... Thank you for sharing,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 1:04:00 PM
    I think that the way that you have done this one deserves much praise...Great idea and great form..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara..Good luck in the contest...

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 5:12:00 PM
    I really like the shift from "gulf blue water" to "black fulf waters," a great device to create a stark contrast. I enjoyed this upload, thanks, Gavin.

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 4:08:00 PM
    We can get a man to the moon, make chips that carry a billions of dots of info. etc...etc....but we cant figure this oil spill out? Beautiful work HG. Th Russians have solved a very similar problem with a small atomic bomb. We need to think about this..I am beyound worried that this is going to change our planet forever. Write to me. BG