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Islands

Tears shed from lost love

                             Flood the inlets to our hearts...

                                                                 Creating islands.



                                                                  Timothy I. Brumley

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  1. Date: 9/18/2011 6:06:00 PM

    Yes, I see what you mean. It takes only a few words and a bright mind to create a profound statement and you have done just that.

  1. Date: 7/10/2010 10:19:00 AM

    I do love how you think! It was so nice finding out more about you here thru your little poems. I better get to something else now. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 6:23:00 PM

    Nice one - ceating islands into the heart. enjoyed it

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 3:55:00 PM

    Very moving image of tears separating people's hearts, creating islands of isolation, Timothy. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 12:57:00 PM

    Personally, I really like my own interpretation of your most superb Senryu. That is what I enjoy about minimalism....it involves the reader to paint thier own picture. Great stuff here. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 11:57:00 AM

    Love the meaning you put into this one, "creating islands"- lost love can do wonders to us, enjoyed this write... P.D.

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 11:55:00 AM

    sad, but true. alot said in a few words. thanks, chuck