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  1. Smith-Johnsen Avatar
    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 6/30/2010 2:50:00 PM
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    Wow! Your words say so much sadness. Love to you. Dane Ann
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    derrick burton
    Date: 6/20/2010 12:52:00 PM
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    I could see this poetry in my mind as I read it, really enjoyed so strong with feeling. Enjoy your Sunday.:)
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 6/11/2010 10:48:00 AM
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    Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Syed. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 6/10/2010 8:15:00 PM
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    Fascinating poem, my friend! Touching and thought-provoking. Very nice. Ruben.
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    linda milgate
    Date: 6/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
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    Powerful portrayal from a child. Good job. Hope it's not from experience but if it is, You have grown into a creative person. The universe is yours. May it embrace you.

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 6/10/2010 5:30:00 PM
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    Wow, i didn't expect that ending, sad ... a childhood taken away so young, sad write...p.d.
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 6/10/2010 5:28:00 PM
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    I enjoyed the last four lines - the love for the mother.