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Psalm of the Sickly Sinner

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Psalm of the Sickly Sinner

Smite me, my Father.
Oh yeah!! Smite me!
Grab me by the handles and pump me full of your Love.
Bend me in all directions.

Hurt me my Father, as I have hurt You.
We are forever separate.

I open my mouth, stick out my tongue.
Salivating for Your salvation.
In holy communion I am unburdened,
as you prod me with Your Light.

Do you love me, my Father? Even just a little?!
Have I pleased You, my Father?
If not, well then punish me!
Smite me!!
HURT ME!!!!!

So long as we're apart,
I am eternally deserving.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2011 2:42:00 PM
    wow. this is strong writing, brother. this needs to be in a book

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 2:31:00 PM
    Who can punish Yoni?not our Father in Heaven,I'm sure,love your unique style!

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:40:00 PM
    Yoni, this is a super weird poem, and I really dig your premise here....I am still re-reading it to see if I have completely missed the point....and if I have, I still really enjoy it haha!! Chris.

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 7:07:00 PM
    Wow.. strong and deep write, enjoyed...p.d.