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mourning... - tanka

heaven is heavy
with the tears of angels
shed for falling stars...
pain's knocking at heavens' gates
asking for its toll of salt...

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  1. Date: 6/8/2010 9:35:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Liliana. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 7:37:00 PM

    The tears/salt reference is very clever..good work .I havent read your work before..if this is any indication you are very talented. BG