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Dire

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Dire

a somber willow
defeated in the drought year

ambivalent hope....

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  1. Date: 6/5/2010 5:18:00 PM

    Nice haiku expressing a nice thought with apt images

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:33:00 PM

    Drought is ruff on willow for they need much water...The good thing is you can root a new one from the limbs in the spring of the year...I hope that it makes it....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:31:00 PM

    Pondering words for your Haiku Rick and feel for the somber willow .. we expect rain tonight for our thirsty trees... there is ever hope.. very creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 3:32:00 PM

    Keep the hope alive, Rick. Had a crepe myrtle that stood leafless like a stick for 10 years, transplanted it and two days later the leaves started to emerge. I hope the same can be done for the willow. They are beautiful trees. Such a well-penned haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 3:29:00 PM

    a wonderful, and delighted read, have a nice one,..p.d.