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Lovers shadow

Loves Embrace
I cease to fight it
his smooth skins
dark and mine
is light
my blanket
is my lovers
shadow
Tonight

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  1. Date: 6/9/2010 8:35:00 PM

    Cannot fight luv no matter what the circumstances ... luv cannot and will not be denied.. Heather thankxxx for your comment on my first round winning poem along with tow others in the P.S. competition.. u should also enter your poems in competition and contests offered on Soup ..a good way to get your poetry read by so many other poets ... especially a good chance to win and really get noticed on site.. this one is a great beginner... check out the contest page... luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:18:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Heather. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 2:06:00 PM

    Beautiful ...Roger x