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A Rose Arose

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A Rose Arose

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                         diffusion 
                         the yellow rose shines
                         Sun to Sun






My first attempt to a shorter haiku.

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  1. Date: 3/29/2014 5:39:00 PM
    I figured out words are a game to you. Combinations of particular ones expose your brain power. I know to never read your work with a weary third eye.. Hell of a write!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:39:00 AM
    It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Ruben. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 5:13:00 PM
    Wow. So sparse and yet so rich. I have also started to ignore the 5-7-5, which can sometimes impose awkwardness.

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 7:30:00 PM
    I admire your courage. Compression is the essence of the haiku, but too much pressure on the carbon yields dust and no diamond. It's a tough trick. Diffusion is an interesting way to start this. Thank you and regards as always, Gerard

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 7:03:00 PM
    VERY BEAUTIFUL RUBEN, ATTEMPT WELL DoNE.-Skat

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 6:33:00 PM
    Go Ruben! Never heard of this before..seems challenging! Must try it also...maybe I can steal some xtra time...Thank you for leaving comments on my poem, my friend! Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 3:05:00 AM
    Lovely poetry Ruben, this is worth trying out. I never thought of a Haiku 3,5,3 > have a wonderful weekend >> James

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 11:36:00 PM
    3,5,3 is really challenging. You did a great job creating a stunning image. Last line is fantastic.

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 3:39:00 PM
    I can picture the beautiful yellow rose...Keep the creative pen flowing...Love the short lines..Very easy to read..Sara

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 1:01:00 PM
    A wonderul poem Ruben, a rose is a rose, nice,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 12:34:00 PM
    Yellow Roses,my favorite kind,thanks for introducing me to this short lovely haiku.One for my favorites!I love the Sun to Sun description,talented Ruben,and the poet to my favorite poets too.C elene!

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 11:11:00 AM
    First attempt...excellent ... u have a gift my friend.. to translate emotion into words of poetry so fine... could see the bloom..yellow roses were my MOM's favorite... and this would be her birth month ... what a grand lady was she... this poem reminds me of her.. thankxxxx my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 10:21:00 AM
    I wrote a short verse for this photo,Ruben. But I just wasn't please with it somehow, you know how that goes. Smile! I love yours thought, Good luck with it, M y Friend. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 9:58:00 AM
    Good try, Ruben and good luck. Thank you for your comments on my monorhyme. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 9:32:00 AM
    That would be pretty cool... A poem in Espanol that is.... Good work my friend.....:JP]

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 6:23:00 AM
    Nice attempt, Ruben!!! Puedo ver tu rosa amarilla con ojos cerrados!!! Muchas gracias por tus amables comentarios!!! Appreciate your comments and I hope soon to read a poem of yours en Espanol!!! Would be nice as this is exactly the best language for poems. Hasta pronto and have a great time, tu amigo Gert..

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 2:23:00 AM
    beautiful image, especially the sun to sun line. Best Regards- Paul

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 9:24:00 PM
    Ahhhh, super Haiku here. Now, I love your 3,5,3 format....11 english syllables--now we are really starting to hit some Basho-style. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 9:09:00 PM
    ps. Loved that Sun to Sun line!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 9:08:00 PM
    Hey, I think you kind of saw it the way I did, Rueben. thanks for the heads up. I can't believe when i check rules and I STILL forget to do it right! Luv, Andrea

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