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Cotton-candy Skies

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Cotton-candy Skies

cotton-candy skies spinning overhead, sun-licked we melt away

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:12:00 PM

    Dare I say this was very "sweet"? Such a good use of wordplay... enjoyed the image of the temporary sensation; cotton candy melting on the tongue. Well deserved win!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:47:00 PM

    Sidewalker, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:21:00 PM

    Many congrats my dear poet friend! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

    sidewalker, a sweet win~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 6:54:00 AM

    this is so sweet, I'd put the action sun-licked up in line 2? we melt away is the cut! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 8:47:00 AM

    Just reviewing my list of fav poems. Gosh, Scott, where are you now? I see you are not too active currently. HOpe you are ok. luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 12:45:00 AM

    Oh this sure is a yummy sounding haiku! Enjoyed how you related this so well with cotton candy, using spinning & sun-licked-- very very cute!! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 3:06:00 AM

    Tremendous haiku - loved the idea of those clouds being melted away by sun-licks ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 11:13:00 PM

    I don't know what contest this was for or if that contest ever got judged or not, but by golly, this was a tremendous write and deserves a FAV. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 2:48:00 PM

    A very well written Haiku and a unique description of the skies. Well done, Scott. Thanks for sharing and good luck on the contest. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 11:57:00 AM

    You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing!! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 3:30:00 AM

    A fine haiku with apt images. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 3:18:00 AM

    Excellent submission, good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 2:48:00 AM

    excellent! nice praise to our creator.