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Mushroom Red Mark*** Triple Acrostic***

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Mushroom Red Mark*** Triple Acrostic***

Marks from the shroom exposed as you
Undress, I caress your
Silky thigh-way, blessed by the mess you
Have made. lay down boo and
Rest the night has reached it's crest.
Overtime I'll relieve your stress, I'm 
Obsessed... your life with 
Me is inevitable, give up on your protests..

Requests will be satisfied,
Embraced, we can pass any test
Discover this love, I'm undefeated in my conquest...

Mellifluous sounds impress, harmonious melody 
Abstract through cyber chats.. Your 
Requests assist the prince to show you bliss, come 
Kiss this man, rub your hands upon his chest.
Sample his skin and leave a hickey on his breast...

Jared Pickett
5/29/2010
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  1. Date: 8/6/2010 3:17:00 PM
    I LOVE this poem! It fills me with warmth

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 2:42:00 PM
    Another brilliant acrostic poem~ you are a master at these ~ thanks for the inspiration~~~

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 8:27:00 AM
    Appreciate the example Mr. J.. will do my "Sweetheart" best..luv.

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 6:11:00 PM
    not me...no blush LOL...haven't seen or thought of a hickey in years LOL...kinda stopped folks from straying! Light & Love (add to my blog please!)

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 10:59:00 AM
    Blushing before I finished...Jared!

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 2:14:00 PM
    very cute, I loved that last stanza. thanks for the HM. I hope to find time for Rondel. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 5:11:00 AM
    No harm..No foul... it felt so cold on here without your warmth on my reads is all and I was thinking back to see if I had said or done something to chase u from my poetry... did not mean to sound like the tigress that I am..haha... know u are a busy guy and in luv right now ..its OK .. all is well and sorry if I sound like ...rrrrrrrrrr... have been ready to chuck my romance and its affecting everything else.. u know how that can be right? luv ya.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 6:11:00 PM
    U mad at me? cause u seem to be commenting on lots of poets but passing me by.. OK what did I do? guess I am being sensitive but I have to know... if I did something wrong tell me so I can apologize and make it right again... freeze out is what men do best.. my Ron uses the same technique... and he is really headed for the PAST barrell very soon...haha..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 11:43:00 AM
    hot one, Thanks for all your comments!

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 2:10:00 AM
    Obsession and passion.protests and the inevitable.Great work.Jar!

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 6:05:00 PM
    Wow, I knew you were a good poet but this is fabulous. You have certainly outdone yourself Mr. JP. It is so passionate and this is a very lucky woman to benefit from all these Mushroom Red Marks! Love Scarlett

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 6:02:00 PM
    blessed by the mess...you undress I caress. What a nice flow with rhyme and rhythm. Very much enjoyed

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 12:18:00 PM
    Great passionate flavor and taste to this one Jared hon and sounds like u have great subject matter to focus on to write so intensely... I felt every line and every move... enjoyed a creative masterpiece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"