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Magical Things

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Magical Things

I think I’ll live forever
I think I’ll refuse to die
Plant my body in the ground
My spirit’s going to fly

Please come fly away with me
Once this journey is complete
Universe can be our home
Our own magical retreat

Two celestial bodies
Darling lets take to the sky 
Forget the why, when or how
This dream is for you and I

Gliding upon golden wings
We can dance from star to star
I would travel anyplace 
So I could be where you are

Angel’s dance like fireflies
Through trails of glittering dust
In heaven magical things
Exist for people like us

It seems we have come so far
Seems the limit is the sky
When I think of who you are
Tears of joy I need to cry

Everything is what you are
You are everything to me
Long as eternity last
My soul shall be one with thee

So let’s live on forever
We will each refuse to die
Plant our bodies in the ground
As our spirits take to the sky



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  1. Date: 11/12/2010 11:28:00 AM

    Congrats on your poem winning the first round - a well deserved win. Wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 12:57:00 PM

    same old mike i used to know. a great poet. masterfully done. John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 10:16:00 AM

    Excellent! Powerful and compelling romanticism, Michael. Great work. Ruben

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 6:36:00 AM

    Very interesting last two lines.YOu want to soar with imagination it sounds like! What a romantic you are, sweet MIchael! thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 1:23:00 AM

    wow that brought tears to my eyes so very Beautifully done loved it

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 7:14:00 AM

    magical indeed excellent poem, harry

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 5:12:00 AM

    Awesome write, Michael! Enjoyed reading it today. And thank you for your congrats on my featured poem...Have a great week! Gert

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 12:59:00 AM

    Michael - thanks for this magical journey ;) Ps: and for the encouragement!! God Bless Wilma

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 9:47:00 PM

    Nice, well written.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 6:58:00 PM

    great magical thoughts--hang in there!! Are you feeling better? Thanks for your comments on my works!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 6:09:00 PM

    Awesome poem Liked it from start to finish.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 5:03:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this magical journey of yours :) & I particularly liked how your first and last stanzas are different versions of each other but somehow connecting the entire poem together, very nice! :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 4:55:00 PM

    This one touched my soul and spirit..Enjoyed..Keep the creative and faith pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 4:02:00 PM

    Nice spirit Mr.Jordan, love the life you present right now. The more interesting part is the life you have after you are put in to the gound, enjoyed your poem. Hope you are enjoying your Memorial day,..p..d

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 6:11:00 PM

    The Universe as a home - Death will not exist. Fantastic thought.

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 4:35:00 PM

    What a beauty this is, Michael. It is so nice to have you back, and sharing your gift! So lovely, and inspirational is this poem! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 12:16:00 PM

    Such a beautiful and whimsical poem. Well done my friend. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 9:46:00 AM

    And why is this not in a book mike simply stunning write for you and family to remind yourselfs you are human and have the knack to lay it on the line hope you print this out and put it on an anniversity card for her keep up the wonderful work here and in life mike for you will always be a winner in my book

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 8:43:00 AM

    I'm sure you wrote this uplifting poem for your wonderful wife, MJ, who has been such a great source of inspiration for you. Indeed, faith in eternal life allows us to realize we never truly die. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 8:37:00 AM

    Excellent outlook on life Michael and your first stanza states the fact of it all.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today ..hope u are having a safe and happy holiday weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"