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Let go

Years had passed,still you're here,
Deceiving me that you care.
You hurt me not once but twice,
Still you're here,trying to make some lies.

We had a lot of arguments,
Which led our friendship to end;
I cut the passage between me and you,
and I stop brawling too much tears for you

I want you to,let go of me,
And that will be my one last plea;
If someday,our shadows cross again,
Maybe we can be friends again.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2010 12:57:00 PM

    So Sad, This screams hurt.......Love Roger

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 12:48:00 PM

    Welcome to the Soup Family.. enjoyed your creative write... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 5:24:00 PM

    This is excellent. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 7:33:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jane. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 2:47:00 AM

    A very painful passionate poem on love.