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The Dark Side

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The Dark Side

Listen closely and you will hear.
	the undertones of death and fear.
You see I'm Trapped in a box of whats supposed to be
	left unclear by my history.
For this path wasn't mine to walk.
	So i got my strength up with my hate and refused to talk.
I'd rather pull the trigger than argue with an ignorant peer.
	So my Desert Eagle i keep near.
Oblivious of consequences.
	 I bust without fear,
	3 shots center mass...
Your end is near.
	You thought you where ready...
 Lets introduce my machete.
	No I'm a B*tch remember.
		 Not worth anything! Remember!
	Your sobs fall on deaf ears as i dismember.
So not to remember. 
	
	While the hogs feast...
I want you to remember YOU AWOKE THE BEAST!!

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  1. Date: 5/31/2010 10:34:00 AM

    "Your sobs fall on deaf ears as I dismember. So not to remember"... I love that line bro.... This poem is amazing pimp..... Your best yet..... Good work my friend.....:JP]

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 3:20:00 AM

    Wow, what a dark and scary write. P.S Thanks very much for commenting on my poem.

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 7:20:00 PM

    Great Free Verse you wrote and dark...Thanks for your comments. All the best, Iolanda

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 9:06:00 PM

    enjoyed, love them dark poems. enjoyed the ending,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 8:48:00 PM

    One word to describe these emotions....scary.