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Time

In my bed,
time is sleepy stretching,
for the Wind I wait....

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  1. Date: 1/15/2011 1:40:00 PM

    gentle..it is senyru because it is about a person not the wind, both forms do not use capitalization and neither uses a title, line 2 1 "p" in sleepy...put the subject in line 1, the action in lines 2 & 3, is the subject time, if so put it in line 1 & the you stretching in the bed in line 2 at the end of the second line you put --- to indicate a slight shift in thought Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 9:31:00 AM

    Great write that makes me feel the mood of nighttime and the sighing of the wind that hums me to sleep...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 9:40:00 AM

    2 "ee' 's line 2 interesting write! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 6:20:00 PM

    Nice images with deep meaning

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 3:00:00 PM

    Great poem. I loved it!

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 2:32:00 PM

    i wish i could write in such few words and mean so much.. i enjoyed