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The eight heart

Do not be afraid
So walk in the name of love
I, with open arms

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  1. Date: 5/20/2010 5:56:00 PM

    Nicely done, nice form of senryu... the first two lines are cool

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 4:21:00 PM

    Oh, I like this one a lot, Edward. Beautifully written senryu! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 2:23:00 PM

    very beautiful senryu Eddie,its nice to find open arms,when one feel alone or rejected.Who doesn't need love?love heals pain,great senryu nice 8 title. .lucky number. .going to my fvs. .Charma

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 12:24:00 PM

    nice senryu