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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 6:27:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing this story with us. Much to ponder about here. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 4:27:00 AM
    there is a lot of truth in this story. It is well written from your point of view. I enjoyed the read. I like to cut up with my comments on occasion, beacause I think poetry is supposed to be fun when people share it. I do appreciate you wonderful comments and support. Keep up the good work, and Happy Writing

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 2:48:00 PM
    where is the moment enigma. I don't see it!

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 2:31:00 PM
    I meant from the last two lines, terribly on her mind, repeated. It seemed ominous when you said, "He knew something had happened" well, nice to see you here this afternoon. I REALLY got behind here at Soup and am trying so hard to catch up now and see all the contests, etc. geeez, will I ever get caught up? haha. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 2:31:00 PM
    Wonderful write! I envy you your journey. I have and I suspect I never will experience the pleasure of the comaraderie that seems to permeate your story which by the way is told better than well enough. I am a loner, unfortunately self mandated. Patty

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 7:08:00 AM
    gosh, you end this so mysteriously, Lynette. What does it all mean? Sounds almost gothic! thanks for your sweet comment on my dark poem. Is this one too meant to be dark? It was an intereseting read! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 7:08:00 AM
    gosh, you end this so mysteriously, Lynette. What does it all mean? Sounds almost gothic! thanks for your sweet comment on my dark poem. Is this one too meant to be dark? It was an intereseting read! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 4:07:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Sometimes those that wed too young are trapped in a very hard life even though they have lots of love...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 9:46:00 PM
    ***these aren't in order, my fault.it comes naturally in random places, and unfortunately out of order when i post...***