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stop all roomers

Stop...
All people.

A bit of....
Trashy words,

A life...
As one...
becomes two.

For those...
Whom die,

Rules over...
All life.

Finish while..
Others,

May fix..
Your error.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2010 8:43:00 PM

    I like the use of the short lines in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 11:40:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Taetha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol